April 12, 2018
Prompt: write a haibun that takes in the natural landscape of the place you live. (Note: A haibun is a Japanese form that blends prose-based travel writing with haiku.)
Spring has blossomed on Honeybee Lane.
Beautiful Yoshino cherry trees line the drives and give a warm welcome to all.
But there is a silence, stark and sinister,
Revealing the absence of the bees that have covered these trees every spring.
Until now.
White blooms tinged with pink
Await pollination by
Bees that never come.
Love your words "...silence , stark and sinister", "white blooms tinged with pink" - what an image they convey . Well done.
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I like your poem
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